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I loved every minute of the story by this author, who is still quite obviously not boring.
Very funny and unique. Well done!
Aha! This was very clever and funny. There were some typos towards the end but, on the whole, you did a good job on this.
This is totally awesome! I love the story; I love the humor. Beautifully done!
So the humor and great detail.
This was deinitely well written and funny. A really good entry!
You made me laugh. Thanks.
How to go Moses! and I like the idea of lower taxes (I live in New York State).
Had a good laugh over this one too. That's how the original Moses mist have felt when he slew the Egyptian, I guess. Maybe your MC needed a dose of 40 years on the backside of a desert (of whatever kind) or just 40 chastisements on the backside :) Do Yankee kids really pay taxes??