The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved every minute of the story by this author, who is still quite obviously not boring.
11/01/07
Very funny and unique. Well done!
Aha! This was very clever and funny. There were some typos towards the end but, on the whole, you did a good job on this.
11/02/07
This is totally awesome! I love the story; I love the humor. Beautifully done!
So creativity...love the humor and great detail.
This was deinitely well written and funny. A really good entry!
11/04/07
You made me laugh. Thanks.
11/06/07
How to go Moses! and I like the idea of lower taxes (I live in New York State).
11/17/07
Had a good laugh over this one too. That's how the original Moses mist have felt when he slew the Egyptian, I guess. Maybe your MC needed a dose of 40 years on the backside of a desert (of whatever kind) or just 40 chastisements on the backside :) Do Yankee kids really pay taxes??