The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Very good re-telling, and I like the authentic names.
10/26/07
Great piece with vivid descriptions.
10/29/07
Very, VERY interesting perspective on the baptism/mikvah connection. I'll be thinking about this one for a while. Very vivid writing.
10/30/07
I really enjoyed this. A great insight into a familiar story that throws up interesting questions as to the prescience of the Saviour.
10/30/07
This is very well written. I especially liked your first line that set the stage for something big that was about to happen.
Great job and congratulation on your win!
11/01/07
Excellent imagery and a good reminder of the purpose and meaning behind baptism. Congratulations on your win!
11/01/07
Congratulations on your 3rd place. Beautiful retelling of the Bible story. Nice job.