The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely images of God's heart and yours. Delightful and poignant.
This is an absolutely beautiful poem The last verse was my favorite. I love the "And God smiled" repetition.
I loved the way the poem started with Jesus, then examined several others, and finally finished with yourself.
I really liked your poem as it showed the different aspects of baptism.
I love the little boy holding his crayon still. How sweet!
This is great! I liked it, especially with the title as the ongoing line throughout. It's so simple and beautiful. Well done! ^_^
I love the feel of this piece. Great writing!
Beautiful. FORM-I especially liked stanzas 1 and 6, where the second and fourth lines rhymed. TITLE-excellent;Heaven rejoices when we accept Jesus as Savior.