The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
What a delightful story. I was there, seeing it all and feeling it all as well. Great job.
10/27/07
Excellent, excellent descriptions. I was absolutely swept into this scene so much, you made me thirsty. Wonderfully done.
10/27/07
Great piece. You painted a vivid picture here.
10/28/07
What a beautiful story of baptism and prayer.
10/30/07
What I love most about this piece is the detail: the scattering grasshoppers, the anthropomorphized vegetables, the disgruntled birds. This is something that you do better than anyone!
11/01/07
Loved this story. Amen let it rain! Great writing.
11/01/07
Very vivid images here, allowing the reader to be part of the whole atmosphere. Very good writing.