The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Lovely, and encouraging to all parents with children who've strayed.

It's just a smidge predictable--is there a twist you can give the ending, something to knock your readers off their socks?
This beautiful story was wonderfully written--a favorite for me this week.
10/29/07
This is a real tear jerker. I could feel the tension between the mother/daughter and I'm glad they were able to make it up in the end with a new beginning for Sally. Great job! ^_^
10/30/07
Tears are streaming down my face. You wrote a beautifully moving piece that my heart needed to hear today.
10/30/07
I did NOT find this predictable - I LOVE the ending, and all the details. I felt like I was right there.
10/30/07
Ooooh, very nice! I can just imagine the setting and the way the mother felt when she was called up front by her daughter!
Laury
10/30/07
Very nice entry. Thanks for the blessing. God bless.
10/30/07
Wonderfully moving story. The time change between Wednesday and Sunday was a little confusing (at least to my simple mind.) I think it was a little predictable only because we knew the topic. Great job.
Wow, congratulations, Esther!!!
Congratulations on you win! Great job of writing.
11/01/07
Congratulations on your EC. This story gives sweet hope to many parents.
11/01/07
Wow, very nicely done! Congrats on your EC!