The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, and encouraging to all parents with children who've strayed.

It's just a smidge predictable--is there a twist you can give the ending, something to knock your readers off their socks?
This beautiful story was wonderfully written--a favorite for me this week.
This is a real tear jerker. I could feel the tension between the mother/daughter and I'm glad they were able to make it up in the end with a new beginning for Sally. Great job! ^_^
Tears are streaming down my face. You wrote a beautifully moving piece that my heart needed to hear today.
I did NOT find this predictable - I LOVE the ending, and all the details. I felt like I was right there.
Ooooh, very nice! I can just imagine the setting and the way the mother felt when she was called up front by her daughter!
Very nice entry. Thanks for the blessing. God bless.
Wonderfully moving story. The time change between Wednesday and Sunday was a little confusing (at least to my simple mind.) I think it was a little predictable only because we knew the topic. Great job.
Wow, congratulations, Esther!!!
Congratulations on you win! Great job of writing.
Congratulations on your EC. This story gives sweet hope to many parents.
Wow, very nicely done! Congrats on your EC!