The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
This is all very good, but your 4th paragraph--wow! What a powerful way to describe her! Just...wow!
You have awesome descriptions here.
10/31/07
Some very nice descriptions here, some maybe a little overdone. But if this is what the MC felt would make her clean I cannot take that away.
Keep writing.