The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for providing depth to this topic.
10/25/07
Good title, really excellent 5th paragraph--this should be read as a meditation for all about to be baptized.

One tiny thing--be aware of the difference between "it's" (which always means "it is" or "it has") and "its" without the apostrophe, which is possessive.

This is presented very well and was a pleasure to read.
10/30/07
Great descriptions and analogy with the Israelites. This blessed me.