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10/26/07
Incredibly vivid and engaging. I felt like I was dying with him - the descriptions were absolutely palpable. Wow.
10/26/07
I can't say it any better than Joanne did ó incredible.
10/27/07
Very vivid. Great to have your guilt washed away.
10/27/07
Powerful, vivid descriptions. Incredible.
10/27/07
Really felt the MC desperation and then his re-birth!
Laury
10/29/07
My heart was breaking as I read this, and I'm so glad it ended the way it did! You captured the emotion of a sinner set free. Well done.
10/29/07
This is very powerful. The emotions are well described. Good job.