The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Bravo! Praise God when we realize that we each stand before Him, accountable as an individual being...no riding shirttails to be with Him forever. Beautiful piece!
10/25/07
Nice! It makes me think about the kind of followers God would have if He didn't give us the choice - ones who serve Him out of obligation or duress, with no joy.
10/26/07
Thank you for giving me a little lesson in Jewish history:) Very interesting...
Laury
10/26/07
The theme was baptism, but this would work equally well as an evangelistic piece. Well done.
10/27/07
I learned some things, and got to read an enjoyable story, too. This is well written. Kudos.
10/27/07
Great piece. I liked the voice and tone throughout.
10/27/07
You did a great job with this. The Jewish Christians I have known have been a great blessing with their heritage and their hope.
10/29/07
Your title was great, and from there on to the end, I was enveloped in this story. So excellent!
10/29/07
This story caught me and didn't let go. Very well told. Excellent.
10/30/07
Wonderful--you succeeded in being infromative and entertaining at the same time. That's not an easy feat!

By the way, using "The" isn't a no-no...I just avoid it, if possible. Your title is great.
10/30/07
Entertaining, educational, exquisitly written and communicated. Very, very good. God bless.
10/30/07
I enjoyed the walk through the Jewish traditions. Loved the roommate's attitude showing from the beginning and the interest he took in the MC's heritage.
10/31/07
This held my attention all the way through. Written VERY well. Wouldn't change a thing! Great read, very enjoyable. Loved the mc and the love of Christ showing through the roommate. Wonderful writing!
10/31/07
This is neat. I like the bit of heritage in here, and especially Matt, what a neat character. I'm glad he was able to help with a great ending to this story. lolz. Great writing, Joanne! ^_^
10/31/07
Loved this. What can I say that others haven't already.
10/31/07
This is very educational, and not boring! That is quite a talent. Excellent writing, as always, and kept me interesting from the beginning, as always. Nice take on the topic.
11/01/07
This is not only like a peek into another religious culture, but also a very well told story. Congratulations on your win!
11/01/07
Congratulations on your EC. Another well-written and entertaining story. Great job.
11/01/07
Interesting & thought provoking story! Congrats on your EC!
11/02/07
Well done, my friend! I love this story. You brought this young man to life, and touched my heart. An excellent depiction of...dare I say?...free will. Congrats! :) Cat
11/07/07
I love the way your story illustrates how God prepares our hearts and minds for the day of our calling. Not one thing in Cameron's life was wasted, not a one in ours.