The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
I really like the military flavor of this, and the analogies you've drawn. My tiniest suggestion would be to get to the main point--baptism and obedience--a tad sooner. We're past halfway before we know where the military analogy is leading us.

Really well-written, a great point, and a cool title!
10/28/07
Great analogy.
10/29/07
Nice title! This sure delivered and especially in following.
10/31/07
Just think of how much grief we would avoid as believers if we just did what God tells us instead of fighting Him or questioning Him. Good job.