The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/05
Funny line about the cows - pity we didn't really find out any of Patrick's weaknesses, except perhaps for his outlandish dreams!
05/17/05
: ) Ahh, yes . . . the reality of resolutions. At least someone knows how to enjoy those first few hours. : )
05/19/05
You know, I was in that Charlie's Angels dream and I didn't see any other guys there.... hmmmm. This was funny! My favorite line was:

>>their anniversary wasn’t until the summer… sometime…. <<

You ladies and you young singles won't be able to relate... but I was bustin up!

Thanks for the laugh!
05/20/05
Adorable! An entertaining read! :)
05/20/05
I enjoyed every word of this piece! (even the sentence, "flip flap went the fat on the insides of Dorothy's thighs"! LOL - too funny!)
Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
05/20/05
My favourite line was the 'flip flap went the fat...' line too. What a fun piece! Thanks.
05/21/05
Ah, what wonderfully fickle and frail people we are! Love the realistic redering of the bloke's insecurities
Ouch! Painfully funny! Great work, Sally. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Woo hoo! :)
Absolutely fabulous, Sally! Painfully honest humor with a laugh-out-loud punch. Well done! -- Lois
Hahaha! That was great!
Sally, you did a great job with this. It was so entertaining! And very well told.