The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Cute! I figured out who Barbie was when I read this, "..but Barbie stood there motionless, a plastic smile moulded on her lips." but was sure at: "..where the woman’s husband was sitting. Ken stared intently .." Brilliant clues.
10/26/07
Very, VERY cute! When I saw the name, I wondered, but had forgotten I'd even considered it once I found out who "Barbie" really was. This was absolutely delightful.
10/26/07
You had me going there.This is a super story with first-class humour.
10/27/07
Very creative and cute. An original vehicle to deliver your message. I enjoyed it. God bless.
10/27/07
Thanks for the laugh.
I loved Barbie's baptism; you ending was perfect.
10/27/07
You got me! What a funny story.
Laury
10/28/07
This article is hilarious! And please don't tell anyone, but when I was baptised the crown of my head was missed too - so I really cracked up when Barbie was shoved under a second time!
10/29/07
I'm going to be chuckling over this for days! It's a refreshing read!!!!
How very creative and fun. I really, really enjoyed this. The writing is excellent as well. Bravo.