The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
What a beautiful picture of innocence, trust, and love. Amazingly vivid descriptions. The end, especially, warmed my heart.
10/27/07
Great attention to detail. I enjoyed the writing and the character of the young boy. Overall excellent. God bless.
10/29/07
This story warmed my heart. This precious child is like so many of us when we were baptized young. Captivating piece.
This was very interesting. Your writing is excellent and it kept my interest. Good job.