The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me smile! And I loved the ending...
10/26/07
Wonderful voice, superb writing. One of my favorites, for sure.
10/27/07
Great piece with a wonderful ending.
This is a memorable story, full of humor and with a delightful twist.
This is a memorable story, full of humor and with a delightful twist.
10/27/07
Such a lighthearted story, thank you :)
10/28/07
Got quite a few chuckles out of this one, from the title right through to the end. I like your sense of humour.
Would a line break or something be needed before the last paragraph? Some may say that the jump forward in time calls for one, but it doesn't bother me. Great story.
10/28/07
How fun! Loved the voice and twist at the end.
10/31/07
A fun read with a good message; there's all kinds of reasons why people get baptised.