The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
This might make a good Sunday School paper!

A few metric tweaks would improve the rhythm just a bit.

You've really covered your topic well, and with a very pleasant verse.
10/27/07
I especially like the final stanza. Very nice.
10/29/07
I really like this; it's a fun read!
10/31/07
Interesting verse, cleansing of sin, then Jesus is baptised(not sure what sin he had) then baptising is only a symbol in another verse. I'll admit I'm confused