The Official Writing Challenge
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BEAUTIFUL!
10/26/07
One of the few entries this week that ties in the "burial and resurrection" aspects of baptism--thanks!

More regular meter would improve the flow of this sweet little poem.
10/29/07
This is a lovely proclamation about the meaning of baptism.
10/31/07
I agree with all the other commenters. Just work on the meter and this will be great!