The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for your observations regarding baptism. I truly felt God's presence in the words you wrote. Unless God is present, there is no baptism.
10/25/07
Beautiful story. I liked your descriptions and the meeting with Jesus in the waters of baptism.
10/25/07
Beautifully written. You painted a picture with well-chosen words.
10/26/07
This is a very effective piece that taps into the reader's emotions. Well done.
10/26/07
Very nice!
Your descriptions are truly outstanding. You've made the experience of baptism real.
10/30/07
Beautiful description.
10/31/07
Well done.
Congratulation on your win, love this!
11/01/07
Congratulations on your highly commended. This is beautiful.