The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/05
I ALMOST wrote a story about New Year from the perspective of the ball! Good story, and I am glad I chose a different avenue!
05/16/05
Very creative! Thumbs up and keep on writing!
Sooooooooooo good! Loved it!
05/17/05
A poetic peice of prose. Lovely descriptive writing.
05/17/05
nteresting Point Of View. I particularly liked phrases such as: 'the tail end of a calm breeze'. Watch out for repetition of words: their and many.
05/20/05
Good writing. May your life dazzle all year long:)
05/20/05
Very nice flow to your first person prose, I like the way you handled the ending without taking a hard hand - kept the piece together nicely.
05/21/05
Some of your descriptions were lovely e.g. "Another year was almost gone—soon to be forever stolen by the frigid gust of city wind." Well done!
05/22/05
VERY creative! What a unique perspective. Loved every word. But that doesn't surprise me, considering who wrote it. You know I'm a huge fan! :-)
Great job once again!
Lynda
05/23/05
Hi Jo! Just a very quick note to let you know that you were in the semi-finals again this week - and deservedly so. You did very well on a highly competitive week. Love, Deb