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10/19/07
So much depth here - and honesty. This gave me much to ponder. Wonderfully done.
10/19/07
I'm quite attracted to the rhythm of this poem. It's heartwarming and honest, too. Reading through the poem, I got a sense of the friends opening up and becoming transparent with each other which leads to real fellowship.
What a lovely tribute to friends. I'm partial to the date you picked, too. It was my parent's wedding anniversary. Well done.
I love how you showed the kinship of fellow believers. The flow of the poem is just right.