The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
Ahem. I think I know some people like this...ahem. It's so "humanish" ( I made that word up) to get territorial, even in church, with what we perceive to be "our" duties and no one else's. Clever and interesting story to bring out a touchy issue within the church.
10/20/07
Oh dear - what a mistake to make! So often, squabbles in churches are over some trivial misunderstanding like this. This was well written. I liked the ending, as it showed how George had developed as a character, and had become humble.
10/20/07
Oops I meant Jason!
10/20/07
Entertaining story--well written and easy to relate to.
10/21/07
Oh, haven't we all been there! Great job of showing all the emotions. A good read.