The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
So very precious - isn't it wonderful to see the fruit of our labors in children.

You've probably already noticed, but it looks like a bit of your story, near the bottom, got lost somehow :( Hate that!
I still loved it.
10/19/07
I like your kids. This is sweet, and well written. Kudos.
10/21/07
This is a sweet and precious story.
10/22/07
Lovely story. The title was great for a camping story.
10/23/07
Awww, sweet story. I'd love to see just a little more showing and a little less telling in the beginning explanation, but fun story!
10/23/07
I love burnt marchmallows:) This was a cute story. Great job!
Laury
10/24/07
As sweet as marchmallows! Dear and lovely story. Children are so cute and innocent and you captured the way they talk and think beautifully. (I just made some marchmallows last week-yum!)