The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/07
Great sense of place. You also have a gift for dialog. Enjoyed this.
10/20/07
I like this unique piece. An interesting take on 'fellowship'.
10/21/07
This was a nice change of pace. How creative!
10/23/07
I know nothing about ships or sailing, so this was a little hard for me to follow. I also couldn't figure out how they could make the decision to remain as pirates. The writing was done very well, and I did enjoy reading the story. It was a different setting than one might expect for this topic. I like that.
Quite unique, and the message is great. Well done.
Congratulation on your well deserved placing. I enjoy pieces that have been researched which clearly you have done. "Whispering into the Caribbean breeze, the Spirit caught his prayer and held it fast." Love that! Also, excellent dialogue.