The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
Here's an excellent example of the kind of fellowship that can lead a person to hope. Good story that's well written with characters that are well developed.
10/20/07
Very vivid and poignant. This felt so real.
10/21/07
Extremely well-written story. I liked it.
Yes, the writing is really good.
10/23/07
Excellent! You got the lingo and the voice exactly right in this extremely original piece.
10/23/07
Amid the hopelessness of a prison environment, fellowship surely must be precious. Well written.
10/24/07
I like the juxtaposition between the coldness of metal: bullets, bus, metalwork, bars and the message from Proverbs 27:17 "As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another".