The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
You brought out many points of true fellowship and perserverance as believers. Well written, but an example of your main points would have helped me visualize them better. Good ending sentence!
10/20/07
Excellent points that all Christians should consider. I would have loved a personal example or two, just to make your points "hit home" more. You have certainly given me much to think about. Keep writing!
This line stood out for me, No individual is perfect and thus no church is perfect...

We should bear with one another and our faults for thus Christ in us is made manifest.
10/20/07
Your ending is right on!!!!