The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
Sounds familiar! These type of days are the ones that make memories. Well written and funny too.
10/19/07
The poor harried superintendent! The Sunday School picnics I attended were quite tame compared to this one, but not nearly as memorable. Your poem is well written and I love the rhythm of it!
10/20/07
Clever and fun - I'm sure you enjoyed writing it. Great word pictures I'm glad I didn't have to see in real life LOL
The parents must have been having a really good time not to notice. lol :) Cute poem and kept me laughing - held my interest.
10/20/07
Your title grabbed me from the start, and I had fun to the end. Thank you!
What hilarious fun! I especially like the ending. And your poetry has perfect rhyme and meter.
This is so well written and just delightful! Your experience with children is showing. I love your pen dipped in humorous ink, dear Friend.
This is one of the most entertaining pieces I have read. Love the humor.