The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/05
A very powerful story. I liked it!
Really enjoyed your story. Written with a lot of heart. So creative!
05/17/05
Crusty, grumpy, self centred old man revealing a softer underbelly. Really like the characte and his rambling revelations.
05/17/05
I liked the 'dear diary' approach in bringing the internal workings of the character to life.
05/20/05
How sad yet its a real description of life, I guess. I wonder, based on the date (Jan 1, 1994) if this is biographical? Whether it is or not, thanks so much for sharing this piece.