The Official Writing Challenge
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Creative and interesting approach to the topic and clever application in your title. Your characters are finely drawn, especially liked the officer.
10/19/07
I enjoyed this very much - I love seeing this character at three different points in his life.

I found the transition between the teen and the adult a bit abrupt somehow. May have just been me, though.

Clever title!
10/20/07
Creative title & felon connection!
10/21/07
This was so creative! I love your title.
10/23/07
Oh, very good! I love the double fast-forwards, such a clever device when limited by word count.
10/23/07
I'm sorry my comment can't be more creative than your story, but extremely creative with great reader involvement and enjoyment. God bless.