The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the analogy of the Christian life as a battlefield, with members of the church in an army or team. Good idea.
Good approach to the topic and good advice from a wife. Perhaps we need to be more aware of our common enemy like the men on a battlefield are. Nothing like outside pressure to draw Christians close to one another.
Very powerful - and I just LOVE your last line. Your descriptions and dialog are wonderful - I was right there with him.
I was engrossed with this story from the get-go until the very end...and with tears running down my face to boot.
A great entry, well written and very touching! I loved it and it will not soon be forgotten. A story that stays in your mind because it touched your heart...Kudos!
Wow! Powerful stuff.