The Official Writing Challenge
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You created a mood here that carried through to the end. Good descriptions, good prose. I like this very much.
10/11/07
You did an excellent job of describing a young person learning the value of honoring and worshiping with the old.
Yes, such an effective descriptive piece! Beautifully written! I'm thinking that perhaps the free verse style might be more expected with a different stanza pattern. It looks like it will rhyme the way the stanzas appear. This is such a creative poem. Thank you for the privilege of reading it.
10/16/07
What a beautiful picture of youth and elderly coming together with one purpose. Nice job with the topic.
10/16/07
Very impressive and anointed. Great job. God bless.