The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
You created a mood here that carried through to the end. Good descriptions, good prose. I like this very much.
10/11/07
You did an excellent job of describing a young person learning the value of honoring and worshiping with the old.
10/15/07
Yes, such an effective descriptive piece! Beautifully written! I'm thinking that perhaps the free verse style might be more expected with a different stanza pattern. It looks like it will rhyme the way the stanzas appear. This is such a creative poem. Thank you for the privilege of reading it.
10/16/07
What a beautiful picture of youth and elderly coming together with one purpose. Nice job with the topic.
10/16/07
Very impressive and anointed. Great job. God bless.