The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! You leave me astonished. To get so much into a short story is truly a marvel. And so expertly crafted, too. I stand in awe of you.
10/13/07
Wonderful! The thing I liked best, though, was that every heart was sincere in their desire to serve the Lord.
Thanks
10/15/07
Good clue with Tie, I found this one easily. I'm glad I had a chance to read this, it left me with a good warm feeling inside.
10/15/07
This is great! I love Katie's interaction with her grandpa. Very cute... Nice tie in with the different people.
Laury
10/15/07
If we really knew and understood each other, we would be so much more tolerant. Lovely message in this story.
10/16/07
Great little character sketches with an amazing lesson for us all. Great job.
10/16/07
Your title is absolutely perfect for these little vignettes...great accomplishment.
10/17/07
Wow, a lot of story pack into a few words. Excellent job.
10/17/07
Great title... so fitting.

Your characters were very descriptive. They had such personality! I could really relate to Heidi who felt it "grossly unfair" that her roommate could look beautiful no matter what!!

Nice job writing, and keep throwing bricks! I'm new at this too, but it's fun!
10/17/07
well done -- as always!