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10/11/07
Beautiful. I love the symbolic escape from the world and daily life to find release in worship. Well done.
10/11/07
Very inspiring and illustrative of what corporate worship should be for believers. I love your example of others reaching out to help us up the mountains of hard times.
I could identify so well with this phrase: "A weak attempt to worship leaves me in tears, and my faith fades to reveal a mountain of despair looming before me." And with the ever-present tendency you illustrate to want to "fix" it with something I can DO or receive from someone or something else. And then He comes with His presence when I least deserve it and reinforces once again that it is all about Him. Your words are strung together so beautifully they are almost like music. Awesome!
10/12/07
This is beautiful and so very visual. Lovely.
This wonderful message written with such beautiful imagery causes my soul to soar with praise to our God.
10/14/07
Super writing! Great voice. Great read on a Sunday morning. God bless.