The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the humor, plus wonderful message. Excellent storytelling on topic.
10/18/07
I love your title, especially "Psalm Sunday"! Your beginning is great, "call my stockbrocker" :) :)

Ouch -- at the end... We don't realize how we sound until we hear our children using our words.

You've done a good job telling this story.
10/19/07
Very good opening line and you kept my interest throughout. Enjoyed the tempo and humor. God bless.