The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/07
True story? Whether or not it is, it is indeed a moving one. Most of us have no idea what it costs to believe in Christ in some parts of the world or, how God speaks for Himself when there is no one to speak for Him. Good work.
10/14/07
This was very good, painful to read, but good. We need to be reminded of what is happening in Sudan. I love this little boy and the line, “It hurts keeping it inside.” Very good entry. Hope more come by to read it.
Laury
10/14/07
So very tender and moving--great job.
10/15/07
Oh, Joe - this is amazingly powerful. You are a master storyteller. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. One of my favorites so far (and I've read a LOT).
10/17/07
Such a witness to the rest of us who have no greater deterrent to worship than choosing which church to attend. Wonderfully powerful story with up-lifting images and characters.