The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
I love your dexcription of the music in the sixth paragraph. Makes me long to hear it!
10/11/07
Isn't it so hard to describe the indescribable? And yet you have done an awesome job in your human endeavor. Good work!
10/12/07
Just amazingly vivid and worshipful and lovely. Makes me even more eager to be in His presence.
10/12/07
The vision you offer is so lovely I almost missed the great storytelling that made it real for me. Beautifully written.
10/14/07
Auper and inspiring read for a Sunday morning. God bless.
10/14/07
A super ... :)
10/15/07
What an amazing picture. Loved the line about the throne glowing.
10/16/07
I love your descriptions. I felt like I was standing right next to the woman with the crow voice. :)

Nice writing, and very good job with the topic.
10/16/07
The writing is amazing. Love the vivid descriptions.
10/16/07
Beautiful. I want to be there. I enjoyed this very much.
10/17/07
Very creative descriptions in your writing. Good job.
10/17/07
Breathtaking! Your descriptions are so poetically beautiful and powerful. Awesome piece!