The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
Your first paragraph is so descriptive (there's really something about a church before the people arrive.)

I love your use of James and John Thunder (named after their father since they are the "sons of thunder".) nice touch!

And now you've got me wondering,... is Mr. Newton the hymn writer? And Judas more wanting investors for a business scheme... :) Then there's Dorcas...you really captured A LOT of Bible people! ...and Pastor Philip...Ruth and her mother-in-law...Martha

This really reminds me of the "Hall of Faith" in Hebrews 11. I enjoyed this curtain call of Bible characters. You are very creative!!