The Official Writing Challenge
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With God all things are possible. As a mother I like to believe that our prayers can reach into eternity even into that split-second when our loved one hangs suspended between life and death.
I forgot to say that I think your story is very well-written and possesses a slightly ethereal element that I found enchanting.
10/12/07
Very well written - you drew me in. Didn't figure out what was going on until the very end - well told! I must say that I found your MC's voice to be not very "steady" - his language improved immensely toward the middle and end of this - didn't seem to be the same person. Could just be me, though.
Love how you ended it especially.
10/14/07
Very nice, moving and ministered your point well. God bless.