The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
Beautiful verses, beautiful words! I like the end where I begin to see the building of the church through the worshipful attitude being cultivated through the previous verses. Wonderfully creative images.
10/12/07
I wish I could write like this. Each verse is stunning and powerful, and together they make a masterpiece.
10/14/07
Loved it. I like the short lines. God bless.