The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
Corporate worship going into battle--it's a unique approach to the topic and very well told.
10/14/07
This was very good. I felt a part of this worship service battle:)
Laury
10/16/07
I enjoyed reading this historical event in story form. The height of the event was what they saw as they looked at the valley, and my only suggestion is to give more specific description to that -- let us see it rather than tell us about it. Wonderful ending!