The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
I enjoyed this story. A beautiful portrayal of a woman's transition from tension into peace. I especially enjoyed the individual descriptions of Maryn's colorful fellow congregants--and how they come to life for her later on during the service and touch her own life. I could just see them and feel with the main character!

The title of this also drew me in, as the use of a personal name always sparks my curiosity. Great job!
I loved your story and promptly thought of someone I knew who was feeling the same way as Maryn. Surrendered is the best way to go....thank you.
10/13/07
This was very good. I'm sure we can all see ourselves in Maryn sometime in our life. I love that she went to the altar to pray. Nice ending...
Laury
10/15/07
A beautiful example of "worship" and very well written. This entry touched a chord in my heart. Thanks.
10/16/07
Very, very nice. Impressive writing with a great message. God bless.