The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/05
I like how you have personalised the months - clever twist and made a predictable story clever - that's what good writing is all about and you did it well.
05/16/05
I love the irony in this one! A point subtly but clearly made. How ealily we are blinded to or own faults and there is only one who can help us see! Oh well done!
05/17/05
An interesting perspective on the unfolding of the year. A very creative way to engage the reader.
05/17/05
I started off reading this thinking.. this sounds a bit like mine...but of course it's not. And of course it's much better!
05/20/05
Cleverly done. Somehow I don't believe that January is that perfect!
05/20/05
Love the personification.
05/23/05
Dixie, I just wanted to pop in quickly and let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the New Year challenge and actually did extremely well. You weren't that far off the Editors' Choice. So well done on another excellent entry. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)