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10/12/07
I like the feel of this poem, and the semi-corporate idea that our mission in life and worship is be about the Master's business.
Sometimes I complain the church is run too much like a corporation these days, less like the spiritual entity we see in the early NT church. Thanks for giving me a more positive angle on the corporate church. And for the pleasure of good poetry.
10/14/07
This is great! You summed up Sunday worship in rhyme. I'm impressed:)
Laury
10/15/07
Absolutely breathtaking in poetic perfection!!! So well rhymed, so much said, and a full plate of the topic of worship. A+ in my humble opinion. Triple "Kudos"! A Masterpiece of worshipful praise and blessings!
This stanza is my favorite, "We ask the Holy Spirit
To bless the bread and wine
That Jesus' one great sacrifice
Might pierce the veil of time." What a powerful and beautiful image! Thank you for this delightful poem.
10/16/07
This is just excellent - the rhyme, meter, word choice - EVERYTHING is just right. Wonderful.
10/16/07
I agree with Linda on that particular stanza. Simply beautiful.