The Official Writing Challenge
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Really different but it certainly go my attention. Zach and Mary's experience would be sort of like having an awake dream. Or a dream that awakens!
Wow, I like the way you presented this....I was thinking there were guards and then went right into the conviction of the spirit in their hearts. Just a cool way to write this revival type service.
10/12/07
VERY creative. What a fun - and convicting - read! Love it.
10/14/07
Creative yes. Enjoyed the read. God bless.
10/14/07
Oh, wow! Strong, powerful, convicting...made me squirm a bit, so you've done your job.
10/14/07
This was very creative. So many churches are split because of worship styles. Maybe a few should visit your Twilight Zone for an wake-up call:)
Laury
Imagination turned loose! The point is well taken and the variety of songs makes certain that everyone has an opportunity to feel the message. I enjoyed your story.
Very creative and well written. Gives me food for thought, too. Well done.
10/17/07
Wow, very creative way to step on my toes. Good job. :)