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10/11/07
Great name for a church going through such a stress, and breakthrough! I definitely cared about your MC.

This felt disjointed to me - didn't flow, in my opinion, anyway.

A wonderful story of revival - both physical and spiritual.
I loved the part about Pastor Dudley risking his own life to save the tiny helpless kitten even at a time when his own faith was a low tide. IMHO that was the instant when things began to turn around for him and for the church.
10/14/07
Good story. I liked Pastor Dudley's character. God bless.
Good concept. I liked the glimpse of heaven, too.