The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. I espeically loved the 5th part at the party. I thought it was going to be a first person story and then it seemed to become something else. I liked how you followed Priscilla through the changes of her life. Blessings!
09/20/07
What a wonderful jounrey. Thanks for taking us on it.
09/22/07
This is masterfully crafted and beautifully told. I love the structure of it, and the voice especially. This blessed me.
WOW, but this really ministered to me! Masterfully written!
Beautiful story. At the beginning I found the format a little hard to follow, but I love the real-life truths here.