The Official Writing Challenge
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I love it. Calm and a surprised ending.
What a unique writing on the topic. Love the surprise ending.
Oh, the confused life of a piano. If only they could talk.
09/23/07
I was hooked by a sneaky writer! I love the personification of things. Your expert writing masked the MC for me right up until the end. Great funny story!
09/25/07
What a surprise ending. Very creative, and good writing.
Just now getting around to a bit more reading. I sensed a surprise ending but thought it might be a pet. So you got me! Your descriptions are superb. Very clever!
"...put a damper on any sustaining consistency..." LOL! You tried to give us a hint didn't you, Beth! I love this creative piece. I too thought it was a pet until the very last. You delivered a delightful surprise with this one!
Ahhhh! So cleverly put together!! The "banging and gnashing of chords" is a great play on words.
11/07/07
This is good! I could hardly wait to get to the end and learn the twist. I knew you were up to something.