The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/07
I think this was a "life flashing before your eyes" moment. You show a lot of skill in your writing. This is very well written, yet so sad in it's detail. For this girl, and all like her, I'm so glad that "this life" is not all there is to our existence.
09/23/07
I'm so sorry for the MC and the difficult life she had. The moment she steps into Heaven will make the painful days on Earth disappear. Such a sad story, but the hope of Heaven at the end makes it bearable.
09/23/07
The moments are sad, but I see this as a piece about conquering the darkness and receiving the unfathomable calmness and joy God gives when it's least expected.
09/26/07
I absolutely love your writing, and this heart wrenching tale of a single moment in time is simply captivating. Wonderful!!!