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Yikes! How scary. I felt your MC's panic, then the calmness that came over her. This was well done.
This is a great situation to illustrate the calm one who knows the Lord can achieve. It also makes me wonder what people who don't know Him have to lean on in times like this.

I loved the verses and songs interspersed. Great job!
09/21/07
Very exciting and scary! I can't imagine remaining that calm, but can see it would be an asset. Good lessons in this story!
09/22/07
Love the weaving of the songs and scripture throughout. You put me right there in the water with her. Wonderfully done.
I liked best the way you showed how scriptures and hymns strengthened and calmed Kaycee. As I read them they did the same for me.
I like the way music and scripture calmed her and carried her through a frightening situation.
I agree there is absolutely nothing as calming as knowing the truths found in the scripture...this article says it all so well. Great job and the citing of references is much appreciated!