The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/07
You've captured every mother's anxiety in the beginning of your story. Sometimes all it takes is something from God's creation to remind us to be calm and that He is still in control. I enjoyed reading all your different events tied together with the bird sightings. The verse from Job is perfect for your entry. Good work on your writing.
09/25/07
I love your use of birds for God's message and peace. Really nice connection between the scenes. Good writing.
09/26/07
God is always sending us messages, if only we are open to see them. I enjoyed your tales of your messages from God in the birds. An engaging read. Great job!