The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This is wonderful, powerful, moving. Excellent and very real dialect. Bravo.
09/21/07
Heart wrenching. I don't know how else to espress myself. It's a frightening aspect of our world, and yet even in the deepest darkness there can be hope.
09/22/07
Amazingly powerful and real. Dialog is just excellent. This tore my heart out!
09/27/07
Wow - powerful stuff here. Masterful storytelling. Realistic situations and dialogue make for an engrossing read.
09/27/07
That was excellent stuff. I feel very challenged - being a teacher and wanting to treat the baddies and the goodies in the class the same! Forgiveness - huh? Do I have to?
09/27/07
This is a very good story. Very touching. Great writing. Nice job.