The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent analogy of confessing sins and a unique writing on the topic. Good job!
09/22/07
I really enjoyed this story! I could see and hear this dad--my husband has often used this same technique on our daughters--and feel the tension and frustraion of the child during the whole beginning process. Great character study!

The title also sparked my curiosity.

Great job!